I need help with narrative writing.

Can you help me with any errors or advices?
My sentences are not so smooth and flowy.

1) The world’s first advanced adoption of nano filtration, and success in achieving a breakthrough with Coway’s acknowledgeable filter layer in water purifier system by producing the Ionized water system and disinfectants generation system by water electrolysis without any chemical, were the miracles that Coway’s constant efforts had made possible. And these contributions can be approved and recognized through our quality of air purifier.

2) Coway’s advanced, personal, and capability-adjustable filter works to minimize the hidden danger from unobservable sources by completely eliminating the viruses that can cause Human Influenza and Legionnaire’s Disease for today’s people who spend most of time indoors, and extinguishing toxic compounds that breed from birds cages, and depurating detrimental materials blown during harsh stormy weather.

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I have these Forget-Me-Not seeds. I want to plant them. I have this really good Miracle Grow soil to use. And I also have this water system that changes the pH level of the water. I want my Forget-Me-Nots to grow great, but I’m not sure what pH level is best. Alkaline, Acidic, or just plain Neutral?

Oh yeah, and I’m growing them in Southwest America. It’s pretty hot here, and it’s also summer. Do you think they’ll grow pretty well?

Thanks!

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Hi we don’t have a drinkable water system in our RV (we could drink it but it doesn’t taste good) and was wondering if anyone uses a PUR or other type water purifier for drinking water?

Thanks!

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Our water system is from a drilled deep well which was hit by lightening several years ago causing significant damages when the surge then traveled through to our home. Ever since then we continue to experience an iron-like deposit on our shower stalls and faucets as well as porcelain sinks, washing machine etc. Most surface stains can be removed with VIM or other light abrasive cleaners or even CLR however we are unable to remove the stains that have developed on our shower stalls. Of course the tiles are white or cream so they show the stains even more so. We do not have an iron filter on our water treatment system as the water tests at low to no iron? yet we continue to develop these stains. I’m able to remove the surface buildup but there are residual stains left behind that I can’t seem to remove. I’ve tried VIM, bleach, CLR, KABOOM and numerous other acidic type cleaners.
Anyone know what this material actually is and how to remove it?? Much appreciated!!!

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I just moved into a home and need a water system to soften and/or purify my home. What is the best way to go??

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I’ve had a 50 gallon saltwater tank for over a year now. Bottom line is I’m not happy with the filtration. I currently have a wet/dry trickle filter with a phospure pad as the filter media. I will sometimes put some carbon in a media bag within the sump as well. I have huge algae, and my water is rarely clear. My live rock is starting to suffer due to the fact that I have to cut so much light time because of the algae outbreaks. I am willing and very interested to hear what you guys recommend for the the intermediate/advanced aquarium filter set up. I think a UV filter will be necessary and also a r/o water system, but I have no idea how those works; do they hook up to the filter system somehow or just to a water source in the house? Again, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

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I bought one of those inflatible pools where you inflate the ring and the pool rises (10′ circular, 4′ deep). It has a filtration system that comes with it, and I’m wondering if it’d be safe for me to use our hose water (which doesn’t go thru our water system that’s in our basement). We have hard water (bacterial iron). The water runs clear but if it sits for 5 minutes you get a slimy rust colored residue in the water. So, I’m wondering, would the pool filter be able to handle this, or should I go thru all the trouble of finding a way to get water from the house to fill the pool?

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I have a private well in florida and my water is horrible. I’m shopping for a water system to make my water, colorless, odorless, and soft. I had a company come out yesterday to tell me what I would need to make this happen, and gave me a price. It isn’t cheap, 3k worth and I can’t afford to be wrong.
Can someone tell me what is the best whole-house filtration system for very hard, high iron, and tannin water?

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i’ve noticed a definite difference in the quality of water from los angeles vs. las vegas or hawaii. i’ve recently vacationed at the latter cities and despite my frequent showers (at the beach, pool and hotel rooms) my skin didn’t feel dry at all.
But once i returned to my home my hair and skin have felt significantly dryer. i’ve been considering a water filter for the whole house or a soft water system. by the way, i’m not sure if there’s a difference. but i’m wondering if either of these will make any difference. i’ve already installed a filtered shower head, but i couldn’t notice a big difference.

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I live in Tampa Florida, my house is 5 years old, my water is hard water. The water in the house has a bad taste and the shower wall, sink, cement walkway due to sprinklers are rust color ( orange ). I would like to install a water system filtration. I do not want under sink filtration. my problem is the main water pipe + shut off valve are on the other side the house or opposite of the garage. the sun strike directly to this area during the day. where can i access the main pipe and which water filtration should i use. I am open to every suggestions. thank you

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